TEN YEARS EARLY: Cozy Mystery Short Story (Murder, Mystery, Death, Cove, Craft, Women Sleuth, Detective, Suspense, Short Story)
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Rating | : | 4.78 (602 Votes) |
Asin | : | B01ATE8ETU |
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Number of Pages | : | 436 Pages |
Publish Date | : | 2015-01-04 |
Language | : | English |
DESCRIPTION:
Slow beginning, then too fast-paced to explain anything No explanation as why it should take somebody 10 years to find the ____, when it was found immediately. The 10 years is not explained. Very poorly written, with incomplete sentences. Writing style is very annoying and totally unconventional. Verb tenses all mixed up, even within the same paragraph. Lots of holes in the story.. ELP said Worth ten minutes of your timebarely. It's not a bad premise, honestly. Daughter is in town to try to figure out how her estranged father died. But two things bugged me. First, although the writing isn't bad, the punctuation is handled horridly. I implore the author to have his future work proofread by a professional. Second, the very ending doesn't really make sense. I don't want to give it away, so I'll just sa
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